First Signs

Straight down the line

First Signs

 

With

The

Very

First

Signs

Of

Corruption

Which

Appeared

Quite

Out

Of

The

Blue

In

The

Hollow

Of

One

Of  

Her

Ankles

She

Promptly

Masked

It 

With

Her

First

Tattoo

.

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

great flow with lots of energy and a splash of mystery, as always worth the read.

[Neville]

Many thanks Cherrie, your time and encouragement are very much appreciated, N

[emmajoy]

Perhaps intended to run your words dark downwards as if with ink on and in the skin?

Clever wording, carefully brief, metered, sketched and with a great yet unexpected finish.. Yes, witty and literally academic

[Neville]

Bless ya stranger, very much appreciated. Loads of thank you's blown in your direction...N

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha! what a fine chuckle you added to my day .. well done! great rhythm and rhyme!! and i love tats (have a bunch myself) .. but the ankle!!!!! oo-owey-owey!! i'm givin' it to ya straight Neville!
E.

[Neville]

Thank you E.N my fine literary friend, much appreciated. All Good Things, Neville

[Sara]

nice piece, I loved it! great job :)

[Neville]

I am very grateful for your time and encouraging words.. All good Things, N

[L_]

Really lovely piece, good work.

[Neville]

Why thank you very much indeed