The Pyramid of Longing

The Pyramid of Longing

A Poem by Neville
"

Nice shape that, why not lose yourself in it?

"

The Pyramid of Longing

 

It

was while

out exploring her

that my lips accidentally

 stumbled upon the tiny hidden pulse

buried deep within the hollow of her ankle

It was surely then my dear friend that I realised

 I want and need and long to forever be your lover

 

© 2015 Neville


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Interesting structure. It cascades as it reveals. Lucky girl....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking a few moments to read and consider these words J.P.... All Good Things,.. read more
Ah, the adventure of discovery when two become an item! Any and all spots can be erogenous zones. The imagery is splendid. Sensual elegance. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

You have just cheered me up no end Lydi, thank you my friend....N

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