The Pyramid of Longing

Nice shape that, why not lose yourself in it?

The Pyramid of Longing

 

It

was while

out exploring her

that my lips accidentally

 stumbled upon the tiny hidden pulse

buried deep within the hollow of her ankle

It was surely then my dear friend that I realised

 I want and need and long to forever be your lover

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I'm too old to giggle, but I did. Yes, if a man's lips are exploring a lady's ankle, we should probably assume that the two are comfy together. What a great pyramid it is!

[Neville]

A fair assumption Samuel & this old guy thanks you for it....All Good Things, Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Perfectly shaped ( shape) poem! A friend and lover in one, what a discovery!
Neville, You treat us with such a beautiful imagery, and with your sensual sensations!
Bom fim de semana para você.

[Neville]

and you my dear, are as always, far too generous tho just as often appreciated, beyond words.... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

It's entirely my pleasure.

[Chris Shaw]

A passionate little pyramid you have built for us here Neville. How positively sensual. Sent a little shiver down my spine. Luvverly

Chris

[Neville]

then I am one happy geezer & true.... cheers Chris.... N

[April Blue]

I really love this.. I love the words you used with great description..

[Neville]

I am truly delighted and grateful for the visit.... Neville

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely.
A decidedly unique and thoroughly passionate perspective.
Work to be admired.

[Neville]

cor blimey sir... many thanks indeed.... Neville

[Ardra]

Lovely pyramid..... and lucky her...

Sweet spot searching can be a fun way to spend time ... ;)

[Neville]

thank you so much and of course, you are spot on.... N

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this piece, as always. Your writing tickles me. :)

[Neville]

Hey I got 6 reviews.... My personal best to date... thank you, N

[Marie]

There's something very romatic about this, and the shape is very creative.

[Neville]

Bless you Marie... Does that mean you like it perchance?

[Marie]

If I comment on a poem, that means I like it. Otherwise I don't say anything at all.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like how this is shaped..and we find pleasure in the most surprising places don't we?

the little sweet spots.

[Neville]

To coin a phrase 'spot on' and many thank, your time and your opinions are always welcome. All Good Things, Neville

[Kelly Scheppers]

How anyone could resist a title like this, is beyond me! Such a little pleasure goes a long way...and to borrow J.P.'s words, "lucky girl"!

[Neville]

You are most kind & likewise much appreciated........N

[Kelly Scheppers]

...my pleasure!