Reflections

Sometimes things are not always what they seem....

Reflections

 

The bridge

 cast a scythe shaped shadow

that just happened to clip the horizontal ladder

as it arched away from the setting sun

 

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nus gnittes eht morf yawa dehcra ti sa

reddal latnoziroh eht pilc ot deneppah tsuj that

wodahs depahs ehtycs a tsac

egdirb ehT

 

snoitcelfeR 

Author's Note

ahc'tnod yhw tuo ti kcehc

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Inside the machine I hear a banging. It looks a lot like a bridge, and the shadow cast does not have to be a scythe. But that's just where this takes me. Very clever.

[Neville]

Love it when ya talk ..... like that my friend....cheers, I owe ya...... N

[barleygirl]

Your cleverness is leaping off the page in this one! You must have a spacial (as well as a special) way of perceiving your world & therefore how you design the page layout of your messages to SHOW your observations . . . PLUS! The bridge & the scythe -- that is such a brilliant juxtaposition! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

You are very generous Margie and I like it... I like it a lot........ Nug, Nug.... Neville

[emmajoy]

Such a checked-out cleverness. There's nothing quite like looking back!

[Neville]

thank you dear emmajoy, is that what you are doing in here in your very fetching current avatar......Neville

[emmajoy]

Might be, could be.. :)

[Neville]

I will take that as a might be maybe... Neville

[emmajoy]

or maybe a might be perhaps, who knows.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Coyote

[Neville]

Always a pleasure to hear from you John... I fly back to the UK tomorrow and will visit your pages upon my eventual return... Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and have a safe trip.

[Neville]

Cheers Friend.... N

[Aaron]

must say very creatively written

[Neville]

Must say much appreciated then, cheers..... Neville

[Aaron]

your most welcome

[LKBillips]

Very creative. Only blip I saw was that you spelt "that" front-wise on the reflection as well. Very cool poem indeed.

[Neville]

Hey LKBillips aka hawkeye, In the words of the great Pink Floyd, leave my blips alone.....joking aside, your visit here is very much appreciated, there ekat taht ..........Neville

[LKBillips]

!emoclew yrev er'uoY

[Neville]

Cheers Hawkeye....... Neville

[Cherrie]

Egami ylevol a DNA, revelc yrev.
Eirrehc:)

[Neville]

xx eirrehC ay sselB

[Cherrie]

Lol or loL

[Neville]

Now that is clever....... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

check it out why don'tcha and your second stanza a replica of the first, and title but back to front. Now I need to work on the meaning. Good evening Neville.

[Neville]

Careful you dont cut yerself my friend.. Yep, you got some of it for sure, but dont let on now... keep working & good morning to ya.......... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning Neville. I'll keep pondering x

[Neville]

Please do, pondering can be good for the soul, we are two hours in front of ya here.. returning tomorrow x

[Chris Shaw]

You haven't had the best of holiday experiences have ya? I bet you are looking forward to getting back.

[Neville]

true enough, but besides getting bit, there were some golden moments too, at least one or two anyway..........N

[Chris Shaw]

that helps :))

[Chris Shaw]

Now I've come back to this Neville, the word "that" in the back to front stanza is now sticking out like a sore thumb!

[Neville]

Ouch, okay, now ya got a choice between a cigar or a coconut............ N

[Chris Shaw]

I'll take the coconut. Shake the milk out of it and you can put it in my afternoon tea lol

[Neville]

Consider it done.........N

[송지ፏ..]

Nice, I liked how you added a foreign language into it for those who don't understand English. I liked how you can actually imagine the scenery.

[Neville]

How very kind of you to visit, many thanks... Neville

[Emily B]

you are missing the t in reflections :)

[Neville]

Now that is what I call a good eye, 10/10 for observation, cheers Emily & thank you

[Emily B]

I enjoyed the challenge!