Childish Smiles

Childish Smiles

A Poem by Neville

Childish Smiles

 

She

 Came to me

With childish smiles

Blue eyes and full of dreams

 

She

 Stole my mind

 And for a while I would

 Appreciate her little schemes

.


© 2019 Neville


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Loved the one words lines here.....they really added something to the thought process here. Blue eyes and a smile can make your mind a bit cloudy for a while, eh? A scheming one will only be charming for a short time. After you have figured out the real personality behind the blue eyes, your mind will set you straight! :) Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Another one that goes back three decades or more.... A whole different world eh. Spot on though with.. read more



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There are these people, who trap us and entrance us for a bit, and then, we snap out of it.:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

I never knew that, well, well, well... In that case, reckon I snapped a long, long time ago. Thank y.. read more
Little red riding hood had similar views about her grandmother until she realised that she was really a wolf in disguise !

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Neville

9 Years Ago

You are absolutely right Tom. I guess we have all met a few wolves in our time eh'.. Many thanks mat.. read more
Loved the one words lines here.....they really added something to the thought process here. Blue eyes and a smile can make your mind a bit cloudy for a while, eh? A scheming one will only be charming for a short time. After you have figured out the real personality behind the blue eyes, your mind will set you straight! :) Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Another one that goes back three decades or more.... A whole different world eh. Spot on though with.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2015
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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