Secret Drinkers

Secret Drinkers

A Poem by Neville

‘Secret Drinkers’

 

Neither the prohibition of alcohol or threat of hefty fine

Deterred us from discreetly sipping warm rice wine on the sleeper

Through old Siam to Georgetown

 

Forget the camera and the note book

This is how memories are made

She said

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© 2015 Neville


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big smile on my face .. another tasteful delight Neville! i don't take many pictures anymore .. when we do we take ourselves out of the event and become record keepers ... staying in the moment of those soon to be memories to the tune of rail cars clickety clacks seems a winner :) another glass of wine he queeried!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

I really do appreciate your visits, insights and opinions E.N and er yes, Cheers
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

:) ............ and cheers to you sir!



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Liked the rhyme part way through line two and especially enjoyed the final lines. Resonated with me.
Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Nice of you to stop by, many thanks & All Good Things, Neville
Yes indeed Neville, grasp life by the gonads, hang on and enjoy the ride !

Another defining piece of cerebral life poetry, no substitute for experience !

Posted 9 Years Ago


big smile on my face .. another tasteful delight Neville! i don't take many pictures anymore .. when we do we take ourselves out of the event and become record keepers ... staying in the moment of those soon to be memories to the tune of rail cars clickety clacks seems a winner :) another glass of wine he queeried!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

I really do appreciate your visits, insights and opinions E.N and er yes, Cheers
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

:) ............ and cheers to you sir!
Forget the camera and the note book

This is how memories are made

She said
I like this part, nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Very kind of you Latifa, thank you very much indeed, N

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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