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A Poem by Neville
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Thank Freud it's Friday....Actually, its Sunday but who's counting?

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Deleted

 

You need to be deleted

You psychopath

See if I care

 

You need to be eradicated

You psychopath

Push me just see if I dare

 

You need to be erased

 You psychopath

Completely rubbed out if you ask me

 

You are so vindictive

You psychopath

You know precisely who you are

 

Some might call that insight

I call it hedonism

 

You are nothing more than a walking id

You psychopath

 

Henceforth

Consider yourself well and truly deleted

 

 

 

© 2015 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Hope it's reasonably self explanatory folks....

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Ouch. Yup. One of the many reasons good people have left. I just wish that more people would stand up and against instead of bugging out, but I get it, it's a lot to defend. I have been absent myself a lot lately.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Your absence as I am sure you are aware had been noted.. To be honest, this rant had little to do wi.. read more
Wow! Just as well for whoever it is that the delete key is not quite the same as pulling a trigger.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by Beccy, tis always a pleasure. Between you & me, it tickles me no end when .. read more
well no... its Monday Neville! ;) ahahaha love the release of angst in this one .. certaily relates to the world of on-line .. but one hopes its poison doesn't seep very far here on the cafe!!
and a fine Good Morning to you sir!!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thanks EN my good friend, nope not to worry too much on that score......N
yeah wow - ouch - please don't hit delete on me by mistake - I mean I know I am a bit nuts - but psychopath may be a bit harsh i'd say ;)

X

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you KWP.... No way, I hope you are here to stay....N
KWP

9 Years Ago

:-) yeah sure why not X
You're right Neville, sometimes one must take a stand and act accordingly or risk being subdued and cocooned in total submissive isolation.... Powerful poetry and as ever, penned from the soul !!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Cheers Tom, again your opinion is very welcome and much appreciated... N
OH MY....talk about a powerful vent. Not sure for whom this is intended...perhaps I am fortunate! Well said. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

You're safe Lydi, couldn't do withoutcha, thank you x

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