Off Track

Off Track

A Poem by Neville
"

Inspired by my recent Asian adventures

"

Off Track


With

Penang

 Well

 Behind

 Us

Though

With 

Our

 Dust

 Not

 Yet

 Settled

On

 The

 Coast

 Road

 

Have

 We

 Missed

 Our

 Destination

She

 Enquired

?

What

 Do

 You

 Think

?


I

responded


 Oh’

Phuket 

She

 Replied

.

 

 

© 2015 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Penned between Bangkok & Kuala Lumpar

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Its worth going just to write this. Brings back memories of geography class giggles.
I once passed a sign for three slags, but it turned out to be hills. That was a disappointing walk back :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

too true my friend.. bin there, dun that.. ta for poppin in and takin a peek :)
Was the song she bangs by ricky martin playing on the overhead speakers on the train. grins like Cheshire cat. wink

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

almost everything is a blur.... :)
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

lol ..............................
I'm jealous now Neville! but Oh please keep sharing Your adventures with us, naughty or not ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you dear Light.. yes.. I hope to at least for some time yet... N x
You know this is just a little bit spicy, in fact quite hot, OK it's scorching. The train may have been on track, you were elsewhere. You weren:t looking out the window were ya? NN. Guess what that means?

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

it was a sleeper....
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I don't think much sleep was gotten on that trip :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

..... :)zzzzzz
Very nice. Say "phuket" great play on words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Oh how I love it when you talk dirty.............. Thanks KLG

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