Off Track
A Poem by
Neville
Inspired by my recent Asian adventures
Off Track
With
Penang
Well
Behind
Us
Though
With
Our
Dust
Not
Yet
Settled
On
The
Coast
Road
Have
We
Missed
Our
Destination
She
Enquired
?
What
Do
You
Think
?
I
responded
Oh’
Phuket
She
Replied
.
© 2015 Neville
Author's Note
Penned between Bangkok & Kuala Lumpar
Reviews
Its worth going just to write this. Brings back memories of geography class giggles.
I once passed a sign for three slags, but it turned out to be hills. That was a disappointing walk back :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
too true my friend.. bin there, dun that.. ta for poppin in and takin a peek :)
Was the song she bangs by ricky martin playing on the overhead speakers on the train. grins like Cheshire cat. wink
Posted 5 Years Ago
Was the song she bangs by ricky martin playing on the overhead speakers on the train. grins like Cheshire cat. wink
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
almost everything is a blur.... :)
5 Years Ago
lol ..............................
I'm jealous now Neville! but Oh please keep sharing Your adventures with us, naughty or not ;)
Posted 5 Years Ago
I'm jealous now Neville! but Oh please keep sharing Your adventures with us, naughty or not ;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
thank you dear Light.. yes.. I hope to at least for some time yet... N x
You know this is just a little bit spicy, in fact quite hot, OK it's scorching. The train may have been on track, you were elsewhere. You weren:t looking out the window were ya? NN. Guess what that means?
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
You know this is just a little bit spicy, in fact quite hot, OK it's scorching. The train may have been on track, you were elsewhere. You weren:t looking out the window were ya? NN. Guess what that means?
Chris
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
it was a sleeper....
5 Years Ago
I don't think much sleep was gotten on that trip :)
5 Years Ago
..... :)zzzzzz
Very nice. Say "phuket" great play on words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very nice. Say "phuket" great play on words.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Oh how I love it when you talk dirty.............. Thanks KLG
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Added on March 3, 2015
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Neville Gone West folks....., United Kingdom
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