Watching Swifts & Comet Fish

Inspired by my very good literary friend Ron Askew aka R.J Askew aka Orlando Furioso. Go check out his fantastic novel 'Watching Swifts' cheap as chips from Amazon..Gonna let you guys decide.........

Watching Swifts & Comet Fish

 

When I eventually tire of watching swifts

And

No longer marvel at either Clown or Comet fish

What

Then will become of you and me

?

 

Author's Note

Occasionally less is sometimes more dontcha fink? Okay, maybe not... N

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Tis always 'less is sometimes more' but, sadly i'm horribly ncompetent in that field!

However, when it comes to sky meandering, there's nothing better. I'm near obsessed by the way clouds alter shape. Have been known to stop the car to study a herd of creatures convort into wigwams and smokey twirls! As to your flying fish.. seeing/dreaming of fish has a meaning, don't you know! As for swifts, whatever their meaning.. beautiful. See, said too much - must learn from you. Greatly inspiring few words, Mr. Pettitt.

[Neville]

Good Afternoon Ms. emmajoy, I am delighted you alighted here and kind enough to consider these words... Mr. N.Pettitt
ps.. might I respectfully suggest you stop putting yourself down I am sure you are not ncompetent in any field

[AYVID N]

Perhaps, I'll watch humans on earth...
more keenly, with a more observant eye!
Their antics can be as engaging as Clowns,
as mesmerizing as Swifts
as exasperating as squirming Comet Fish...

Thank you for this thought provoking offering dear N!

[Neville]

I am grateful to you for the visit and for considering these words of mine Divya... All Good Things, N

[AYVID N]

It was a pleasure, N.

[Neville]

Then we have a win win then.. smiles... N

[AYVID N]

(Smiles...Happy ones :)))))}

[Chris Shaw]

Birds in the sky, fish in the ocean. How could you possibly tire from looking at either? But if you did, then I guess you would need to either find a new hobby or start talking to your other half. This answer is entirely based on my personal experience :))

Chris

[Neville]

I find sky watching a fascinating way to gain inspiration & love the sea.. occasionally tho I do find myself talking to my bottom half.... Cheers Chris... Many thank you's winging their way towards ya & true... Good Morning... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Have to agree with you about the inspiration you can get from the sky or the ocean. Many a poem I have penned from thoughts generated while gazing. Good morning Neville, have a great day and make sure your bottom half never talks back to ya

Chris

[Neville]

write on.....