'Somewhere'

Just a few words slung together that kind of took form as they settled in the dust of many yesterday's long gone

Somewhere

K and her amazing

Technicolor dream socks

Seemed bright at first

Until they faded

 

K in her nightshirt

Played with the cat

And laughed

Before we went to bed

 

I imagine even now

The soft and fragrant light

Of midnight oils

Still burn somewhere

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmm .. for something slung together it came out very well, i think .. i wouldn't change anything about it .. its such an easy read .. emotive .. smart scene creation .. scents and sounds .. the title and last line wrap it up in a tightly woven, mature, healed experience of lost love .. i suppose she took the cat with her :}
E.

[Neville]

Much appreciated E.N --- Yeah and just about everything else too... All Good Things, N

[TL Boehm]

a wistful thing for just being thrown together. How are you these days?

[Neville]

Bless ya my friend for taking time out and stopping by. I am fine, sorry for the delay in responding but have been out of the country for a few weeks... All Good Things, Neville

[Tom]

Poignant and nostalgic memories Neville of a once-upon-a-time long ago, though the sentiment is still evocative and almost tangible such are the power of your creative words !

[Neville]

Cheers Tom my good literary pall, I really do appreciate your insight and positive sentiments which are always so very encouraging, Neville

[Beccy]

Neville, this is simply lovely. There must have been a little bit of magical memory in the air when you penned this.

Beccy.

[Neville]

Thank you Beccy, I truly appreciate your words here and yes, I guess you are probably write x

[Lyn Anderson]

This is interesting, my friend, as always. A love that faded, one for a woman who was bright, and brash, but in the end wasn't all that? And where is she now, amidst the scented candles, playing with her cat.

[Neville]

Thank you KL as always, pretty much spot on......... x

[Frieda P]

'Technicolor dream socks'...I have to get me some of those, interesting Neville, sounds like some bittersweet reminiscing of a love long gone. I really like that last stanza, enjoyed.

[Neville]

Very much appreciated Frieda... All good Things, Neville