My Son
A Poem by Neville
For Richard.... Say it as it is, I say............
My Son
Hey
You
My
Perfect
And
My
Only
Son
I
Swear
I
Saw
My
Father
In
Your
Eyes
Each
Time
You
Smiled
Before
The
Camera
Beneath
Those
Perfect
Cuban
Skies
© 2014 Neville
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nice one
i think nothing more needs to be added
I understand each nuance X
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you KWP, I very much welcome your opinion, please feel able to stop by anytime... N
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It is nice when we look at our children and see someone we held dear, in their actions or in their looks, or both.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Darn right KLG... I guess most parents can probably empathize with this.... N
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Wonderful sentiment Neville, the family lineage is something to cherish and be proud off and your loving son is living proof of that !
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Tom, your opinion is always welcome and much appreciated, N
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How lovely. The eyes have it every time.
Beccy.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Cheers my literary friend & All Good Things to you, N
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Added on August 23, 2014
Last Updated on August 23, 2014
Author
NevilleGone West folks....., United Kingdom
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