My Son

My Son

A Poem by Neville
"

For Richard.... Say it as it is, I say............

"

My Son

 

Hey

You

My

Perfect

And

My

Only

 Son

 

I

Swear

 I

 Saw

 My

Father

 In

 Your

 Eyes

 

Each

Time

 You

 Smiled

Before

 The

 Camera

 

Beneath

 Those

 Perfect

 Cuban

 Skies

 

© 2014 Neville


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nice one
i think nothing more needs to be added
I understand each nuance X

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you KWP, I very much welcome your opinion, please feel able to stop by anytime... N
It is nice when we look at our children and see someone we held dear, in their actions or in their looks, or both.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Darn right KLG... I guess most parents can probably empathize with this.... N
Wonderful sentiment Neville, the family lineage is something to cherish and be proud off and your loving son is living proof of that !

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Thank you Tom, your opinion is always welcome and much appreciated, N
How lovely. The eyes have it every time.


Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Cheers my literary friend & All Good Things to you, N

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Neville

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