Untitled

Another one word liner straight down the page

Oh

How

I

Wish

I

 Was

 Wrong

 

Just

Take

 The

 Words 

From

 This

 Song 

 

Then

Take

 The

 Gra

From

 The

 Grail

 

And

Take

 The

 Wind

From

 My

 Sail

 

Oh

How

 I

 Wish

I

 Was

 Wrong

 

But

 As

 Always

I

 Am

 Write

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

Reviews

[Papaya]

Are you absolutely sure you are write?

[Neville]

tis written... so ta and true :)

[Papaya]

well then it must be so :)

[Neville]

tis an absolute must... :)

[Onlyme]

I loved this Neville. Great write.

[Neville]

I thank you Dawn til dusk :)

[Tony]

Yes, when you write you are write. That is very clever. I like this one

[Neville]

Bless ya friend.. write on & true... :)

[Anjeline]

What a fun piece of writing. I absolutely loved it. It has a wonderful flow and a cool attitude in each line, specially- I wish I was wrong.
:)

[Neville]

you are far too kind my friend, but I thank you for it... Neville

[Anjeline]

You're welcome :)

[Neville]

........... :)

[Chris Shaw]

There's a fair bit of backbone in this Neville as well as a sprinkling of mystery for the sleuths among us. Now as for title, why is it untitled? There you go, more sleuthing. Right/write it's all the same to me.

Chris

[Neville]

I dunno.. I had completely forgotten about this .. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Your muse must have been playing with you. They do that at times.

[Neville]

do ya reckon.... and I never felt a thing..

[Tom]

No matter what way you read this, you come out a winner Neville !

A intriguing, cerebral piece indeed!

[Neville]

Aw gawsh Tom... I am truly delighted you stopped by and many thanks indeed for your encouraging words... All Good Things my literary Friend, N

[sharonlee]

Clever Conundrum and quirky play on words. Nicely done!

[Neville]

Thank you, appreciated, N

[Frieda P]

I'm still trying to figure out exactly what you're write about, an intriguing brain teaser...I thought it had to do with 'ail'....but then I was off track, back on for the ride again. :)

[Neville]

Enjoy the ride

[Frieda P]

This drove me crazy all night, is there really a solution? :)

[Neville]

Of course, or not as the case may be, or not to be, now that my friend is the question. Or is it the answer? ... N

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, did my kids put you up to this?

[Neville]

You look far too young to even contemplate kids............

[Frieda P]

I have 3 grown men, but thanks, you made my day hon.........!

[Neville]

Another win win then, congratulations.........

[Frieda P]

Yes they are indeed, but are you even gonna give on this piece? Or do you want to see me in a new straitjacket? .....

[Neville]

Yes please..........................

[Cory Barrett]

i think i over though it, i keep trying to spell out this poem into a new one in my head

[Neville]

Now you don't want to over do it my friend, just take it as you find it or you will tie yourself in knots, N

[Cory Barrett]

i think i over though it, i keep trying to spell out this poem into a new one in my head