Shooting Stars

Shooting Stars

A Poem by Neville
"

Just an idea that came to me out of the blue

"

Shooting Stars

 

They called in

Zero

Then they killed him

Because he read in bed

Or so she said

 

Now he

Is red in bed

Whilst she is read about

In many other people’s beds

 

Zero

The sniper or hit man

Feel free to assign any label

You might please

 

Well he got clean away or so they say

Shooting Stars

John Lennon JFK whose next eh


?

 

© 2014 Neville


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Neville
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Yes indeed Neville, alot of psychopaths, neurotics and darn right wicked individuals out there and regrettably their numbers seem to be on the increase!

An inventive, creative piece on a sign of the times l fear !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Cheers Tom, much appreciated, All Good Things, Neville
I have to be honest and say I can't follow the line of thought here. Still, there is a bone chilling message....too many murders....too many crazy people with guns. A stray thought I suppose. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

I like honesty & to be honest does it really matter? N
Nice little thought out of the blue, I think. I especially like the second stanza.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Bless ya my favouwrite cat ............N
reads like a burst of inspiration .. no explanation needed .. God bless and inspire us all :)
E.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Thank you E.N, thank you very much indeed, N

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