Shooting Stars

Just an idea that came to me out of the blue

Shooting Stars

 

They called in

Zero

Then they killed him

Because he read in bed

Or so she said

 

Now he

Is red in bed

Whilst she is read about

In many other people’s beds

 

Zero

The sniper or hit man

Feel free to assign any label

You might please

 

Well he got clean away or so they say

Shooting Stars

John Lennon JFK whose next eh

?

 

Author's Note

Nothing of note

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Had to reread this one, very clever Neville.

[Neville]

An eventual win win then I hope. Bless ya Frieda, N

[Frieda P]

I wasn't thinking along the lines of those type of stars when I first read it...a brilliant idea.

[Neville]

Cheers, you do realise this makes you a serial reader, don't ya x

[Frieda P]

Haha I've been called worse ;)

[Neville]

And her fingers, like a weavers quick and cool

[Frieda P]

That's going to be my next status, watch out I'm a serial reader. :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

Very engaging. A must read for any one who wants some entertainment. :D Great work :)

[Neville]

Thank you kindly sir. All Good Things, N

[Beccy]

Such unwanted attention has been an occupational hazard of the famous since time immemorial. At least I won't be next. :)

Beccy.

[Neville]

Absolutely, but hey you never know. Thank you for stopping by... Al Good Things, N

[Alfred Kukitz]

Tricky word play I just hope I'm not next.

[Neville]

Your time and opinion are much appreciated. All Good Things, neville

[Matching Socks]

Not a bad little idea out of the blue.
Enjoyed it, very entertaining!

[Neville]

Success then............. Cheers N

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I just enjoyed this a lot! The combination of easy flow and emotion captures a reader and has a bit of a sweeping effect.

[Neville]

I truly appreciate your taking time to consider these words, many thanks, N

[A. Amos]

This is one interesting write and I truly enjoyed...thanks for sharing

[Neville]

That's what it's all about, my pleasure & glad you stopped by... N

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Lyn Anderson]

I read this already, but John Anderson sent me an additional request. I liked it then as I like it now, and rarely have I ever not thoroughly enjoyed your poems.

[Neville]

Bless ya my Friend....N

[John Anderson]

This is so beautifully expressed and finely written. I love it's depth and wonderful flow as well. The ending was fabulous. Great job!

[Neville]

I much appreciate your stopping by and very kind review, All Good Things, N