Should You Ever Need a Halo

Should You Ever Need a Halo

Should

You

Ever

Need

 A

Halo

 

Just

Take

One

From

 The

 Rack

 

I

 Always

 Keep

A

 Spare

For

Occasions

Such

 As

These

.

 

 

Reviews

[Elly_Green]

That is awesome! Reminds me of a song "Every Morning" by Sugar Ray.

Every morning there's a halo hangin
From the corner of my girlfriend's four post bed
I know it's not mine but I'll see if I can use it for
The weekend or a one-night stand

I always liked that song because I see the boyfriend just picking up the halo and strutting out the door to use it to pick up some other chick.

Your poem gives me the same impression. Just take it, use it, don't worry about returning the good intentions. Have to wonder about whether the speaker is a man or woman - doesn't matter in the long run, but sparks a good conversation.

My favorite part, though, is the appearance. Perfect! Well done, indeed!

[Neville]

Cheers for this lovely review Elly_Green... Much appreciated indeed, N

[J.P. Bristow]

Halo of gold-beck.........liked it

[Neville]

I am now falling in love with my pen again.... Your visits are much appreciated.... N

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville ... love your poem...
Halo. I am often chasing my Halo
down the street... Are you looking
forward to Spring and flowers
with birdsong... As much as I am ?
truly... Pat

[Neville]

Hey Patricia, thank you so much for your kind words. Please accept my apologies for not commenting before now but have been working as a volunteer in a psychiatric hospital in West Africa for the last 2 months. All good Things, Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

Great job for helping people...
truly... Pat

[Tom]

Sublime Neville and so compliments the song I'm listening too at the moment ' Whisky in the jar' ...The official Metallica version !!

[Neville]

Bless ya Tom, All Good Things, N

[K.N. Lorenzen]

Haha!!! Good one, Neville :) I had a great (quality) laugh ;) I like it, and how you have arranged it!

K.

[Neville]

Cheers K. Sorry for the delay in acknowledging your last comment but have been volunteering in West africa for last 2 months, N

[Einstein Noodle]

love the humor ... hope you have plenty to go round :)
love and peace bro
E.

[Neville]

Hey EN, I am so glad you stopped by. Thank you so much.. I am off to Africa tomorrow for three months volunteering so won't be around for a while... Stay safe, keep writing and be in touch, N x

[Einstein Noodle]

wow ... sounds like a grand adventure ... i will keep checking your page for sure... you do please stay safe ... the Eastern world seems so much in an uproar all the time ... i am saying my prayers for protection for you
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ouch! And this is where you shine so bright. A sarcastic quip with a lot of bite! And just because I have the time I tease you with my little rhyme!

[Neville]

Goodeness gracious. You are most gracious... Thank you, N

[Shaquana Adams]

Short and simple. Always be prepared :)

[Neville]

Absolutely my dear friend & oh' thank you.. All Good Things, Neville