For a Friend Whose Tears Fell on My Shoulder

For a Friend Whose Tears Fell on My Shoulder

A Poem by Neville

For a Friend Whose Tears Fell on My Shoulder

 

If you really feel like crying

Don’t hide your face away

Take a long hard look at me


No-one’s worth the tears you shed today

 

I understand he did you wrong

When all the time you did him proud

My friend that’s life and love is a merry-go-round

 

 

© 2019 Neville


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Everyone goes through betrayal at some point. Lucky are those who have such an awesome friend to help them get over the painful patch. Great poem N.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

You are most kind my friend.... and I do so thank you for it and true... Neville :)
AYVID N

5 Years Ago

You’re welcome N 🌸
Neville

5 Years Ago

............. :) cheers D... N
Sweet, patient and oh so true. Everyone needs to hear this at some point during their life. Look at ya you ol' softy!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Writ a long time ago ... now I'm ard bloomin ard...except round the middle... Cheers Crowley N :)
This is great! If only I'd had you around for those 50 heartbreaks or so, over the years! *wink! wink!* These are the words every sore heart longs to hear. I'm glad you've been a friend like this to many (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Bless ya Margie.. I do make a point of insisting they pay for my dry cleaning bills tho NUG NUG .. N.. read more
Special indeed for anyone to have a friend who will allow those tears to fall on their shoulder. That is true friendship, no holding back by either party. Rare, I would say. Nicely conveyed Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

normally my shoulders, tho broad are reserved for parrots... thanks for being special.... N
Tear today gone tomorrow.
That alteration almost works.

But not as good as your lovely poem. Very heartfelt.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Cheers for tears... almost works too.. Bless ya Cherrie, so much appreciated I can tell ya... x
You are a friend indeed... Nev but in my blubbering whines... at that time. don't be surprised if i didn't kick you in the behind! (and of course you would be right:) how you condense so much in so few lines always blows this bunny's mind.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

You are such a funny Bunny but I luv's ya all the same... Cheers BB.. always welcome and always appr.. read more
How compassionate and full of true friendship this is! From the heart, Neville.....I am sure your friend appreciated the shoulder and this sentiment! Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Tis such an old one now Lydi** I found it by accident and thought... maybe, just maybe... Bless you .. read more
I couldnt say more, love is a merry go round. Glad you offered your shoulder.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Hey Cassie, delighted that you were able to consider this. Thank you so very much. All Good things, .. read more
Your style is sweet and simple, as is letting your friend cry on your shoulder every once in a while. Is it whose? or who's?:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Whose... Oh' how I love to be so corrected, N
HA so so true...nice to have a shoulder to cry on though....you're a good friend Neville, let her cry, the merry-go-round can wait............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Bless ya Frieda P... I am trying to get a few things off my chest... AGT's N
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

That's what poetry is for my friend...my pleasure. :-)

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Added on January 20, 2014
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