Job Lot of Biro's

Sometimes, all you needs is a pen....

JOB LOT OF BIRO’S

We rarely see each other now

And

On those occasions when we do

I always feel the need to write down

Every single word you say

 

The way you look smile and laugh

The way you push jab or slap

When I have either pleased or offended you

I am often still writing

 

Long after you have said good-bye

 

 

Author's Note

Don't it make you wanna cry eh....

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

When the inspiration hits, you have to go with the flow (of the pen). It's one of the better ways to capture a memory, not only the image, but your thoughts about it. Very nice.

[Neville]

Very true. Much appreciated too... All Good Things, N

[Tom]

She made an impression then ?

[Neville]

She most certainly did Tom. Many thanks, N

[Lyn Anderson]

very interesting write. I don't know what Biro's is, but it doesn't take away from the meaning of the piece.

[Neville]

Hey you, I am glad that you came across this - Language eh, on this side of the pond a 'biro' is the same as a ball point pen. All Good Things, Neville

[Ruth]

I love this :)

Cry? On the contrary, made me smile x

[Neville]

Most grateful. Thank you, Neville

[Shawn M]

Man, that's a killer closing. Well written, although I think the poem could use some more imagery beyond just look, smile, laugh, push, jab, and slap. Showing us these things would help the poem out considerably! Thanks for sharing!

[Neville]

Hey Shawn M, much appreciated. Thank you