Good or Bad?

Good or Bad?

A Poem by Neville
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Does it really qualify for one?

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Good or Bad

?

 

I asked her why

?

She replied why not

?

What a way to start an evening

?

© 2013 Neville


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Neville
Go on, I can take it....

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Lol! Well .. Neville .. i don't know you made this piece with an intention to make laugh or not but i really laughed at your this piece.

So, yeah! It could be qualify for one but what i actually think is that this one can qualify for all beautiful angels .. just treat them right! Don't give them pain!

Nice work, I loved it!

By the way, your woman's gonna kiss ya on yer forehead because am sure you'd made her laugh as well if she reads this stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Your comments a very much appreciated. Thank you, N



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Lol! Well .. Neville .. i don't know you made this piece with an intention to make laugh or not but i really laughed at your this piece.

So, yeah! It could be qualify for one but what i actually think is that this one can qualify for all beautiful angels .. just treat them right! Don't give them pain!

Nice work, I loved it!

By the way, your woman's gonna kiss ya on yer forehead because am sure you'd made her laugh as well if she reads this stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Your comments a very much appreciated. Thank you, N
Umm. Not so sure. I picture a married couple. Could be fighting, fooling around, or watching tv. Why not?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Absolutely, why not indeed .... sometimes vague is more precise dont'cha think? N

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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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