Thinking of You

Just thinking...

Thinking of You

If I were not here

Thinking of you

I would be somewhere else

Thinking of you

 

Author's Note

Just a few words slung together in between my cardiovascular workout & a moment of lust... N

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

funny how the noodle wags round in circles :) curious ... did you slow down and speed up involuntarily during that cardio? seriously though Neville ... this poem reminds me of someone that positively took over my nog ... when work was done for the day i actually ran to the locker room to change and get home ... oh my ... "they were the best of times .... they were the worst of times" ;} and quite frankly ... that was the impetus for me starting to write poetry ... the power of love forced me to it ...
E.

[Neville]

snap.. same here.. yes sir tis funny innit... it takes just that one spark and kaboom... cheers Gene... good on ya brother :)

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Neville...and always ..back at ya! :)

[Neville]

....... :)) N

[emmajoy]

Old words and meanings are more than often the best and most sincere. So few words here but, such big meaning: has a lightness, has affection - maybe more. And, for me, has undeniable charm and that endures, yes?!

[Neville]

how utterly charming, thank you for visiting these old scribbles emmajoy :)

[Chris Shaw]

Brevity and simplicity here, and yet between the lines so much depth. Nicely romantic Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

It dont hurt every now and then tho does it our Chris just dont tell the missus :) x

[Lorry]

It is the simple facts of life that get heard the loudest, like talking wuietly makes people listen, you state a simple fact and it is so profoundly heard. Some sentences can conjure more vivid images than some novels. You have achieved this here my friend, like whispering in 20 foot high letters.

[Cassie]

such a sweet little poem, I have enjoyed reading

[Neville]

thank you dear Cassie, much appreciated.. N

[Stella Armour]

always on your mind, then she will never be far away from you wherever you are..

[Neville]

thank you dear Stella.. these words are just getting an airing... originally written many moons ago.. but one never forgets do they x

[Stella Armour]

no, one never forgets the souls who touched your heart :)

[Neville]

how very bloomin true... :)

[Neon]

A true-lovers always thinks only of the someone with whom he's in love because a heart that's already crashed on someone never forgives the scent of that love then it doesn't matter wherever how far a man's from the beautiful woman because one day man goes keeping the woman right into the arms of flower to give her pleasure with the kindness without pain because true lover never gives pain but 'Pleasure with piece'... and woman loves man who keeps her not into a room but into the deepest part of the heart.

Thanks for penning such a splendid piece, i loved this and am damn 'Hell' sure a woman's gonna love this piece with whom your in love and of course she's in yours.

[Neville]

You are far too kind but the sentiments you convey are much appreciated. Thank you, N

[Tom]

Yes indeed Neville.. nice thoughts!

[Neville]

When I first wrote them well over 30 years ago, I quite liked them too. My wife still has the original somewhere, I think.... I was genuinely working out when they just came to me... Thank you Tom,

AGT's
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[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. Exactly what it is.

[Neville]

My, you have been busy. Much obliged KL

All Good Things my Friend, N

[TL Boehm]

This made me chuckle - I found it quite relatable.

[Neville]

Ta TL - I got a result then.... N