An Occasional Dream

An Occasional Dream

A Poem by Neville
"

Strange how the truth always comes out in the end

"

An Occasional Dream

 

Occasionally


I dream you are imperfect


You have torn your dress or grazed your knee


Is it possible to stumble on the truth in such a way

?

© 2023 Neville


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Neville


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It certainly is; it shows us exactly who we are, NOT PERFECT! no one is and it's okay to stumble, fumble and scrape you knee...no one SHOULD judge you....
Nice write, Neville
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Thank you so much for the visit and for your obvious understanding Betty .. Neville
Stumbled, no i don't think so. At least not in my case. Fumbled is a more accurate description i do believe.
But then again, depending on how many nips of the nectar i've imbided, stumble might work as well.

:))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


glad to hear that some things don't change .. cheers
Do one's imperfections make them who they are and should we embrace their flaws? yes!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Glad you see it my way and of course, I do thank you for it .. Neville
Short answer yes it is. And you obviously have done it to write this and view life in this way. Excellent work I think.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Perhaps then, I should thank you, maybe .. N :)
Ken Simm.

1 Year Ago

Yes you should. Its only right.
Nice Work Neville and I like the air of mystery in this Piece - a question posed without an answer. Excellent.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


How very kind you are my friend .. Many thanks indeed .. Neville
I loved it..The theme was indeed interesting...Imperfectly perfect..You know who love me most in this world? They are none other than my flaws..And actually they are the one who make me who I actually am..No one is perfect and actually there is perfection in all our imperfectness also..
Keep writing..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you again Riddhi.... much appreciated and if ya promise not to tell anyone, I might just take .. read more
Riddhi

6 Years Ago

Actually I need to do that thing...
Imperfectly perfect. In nature nothing is perfect and that is how every thing is perfectly unique. You should know, in your profession you have dealt with all the delicately damaged ones didn't you? Neville dear, You always set me thinking for a long while.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Occsional dreams written a few years back Have a way of toucHing a few Hearts - or so it seems. We all Have flaws... and it's thHat reality tHat makes tHe most perfect of dreams. Didn't you know tHat? Brevity is tHe perfect foil for blatHerers too - wHat's more!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

ah' but they are old one's.... x
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

THat probably counts me in tHen!
Neville

6 Years Ago

I think not... but then... everything is relative I s'pose... cheers Mr. N
Imma go for the literal translation here Nev...Take it from one of the clumsiest women I know...you can literally trip on it ....fall down and break your crown! Been there done that...got the tshirt!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Ah' maybe take a few inches off the hem......bless ya Queenie..
Gypsy Warrior Queen

6 Years Ago

OUch...see! If only the truth or the fall was that easy:)
Neville

6 Years Ago

You just take care of that crown ya hear..

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