Yours Internally

Yours Internally

 

This love for you

Cannot be bought

Borrowed shared

Lost or loaned

 

Nor can it be bound

By time or distance

It can not fettered

Tainted or watered down

 

By the desire

For any other material thing

I give it to you free

And unconditionally

 

Forsaking the very breath

And bread of life

No catch no clause

No forfeit whatsoever

 

Yours internally

 

 

Author's Note

There are none so please don't ask, just make of it what you will...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

These are beautiful lines and I can't believe that a poem you originally posted five years ago has had no comments until I called. There is no accounting for taste. I don't know why you used the title "Yours Internally" I kept wanting to replace internally for eternally. I am sure you must have very valid reasons. There is incredible sincerity in what you are saying and it is said with passion.

Chris

[Neville]

I do appreciate you so and must thank you our Chris for kick starting what seems like a flood of views to these words of mine :) x

[Chris Shaw]

Well, I started the ball rolling, I'm sure the trickle will lead to a flow if not a flood :))

[Neville]

thank you, am not going to hold my breath tho

[Chris Shaw]

Patience. It is taking up to four days or so for my stuff to get read at the moment.

[Chris Shaw]

It's just clicked now your title. All I am going to say is Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus

[Mrudula Rani]

The love that can't be bought, borrowed, sold or loaned; that is the definition of true love. Which you keep internally; it is the most precious thing between you and your lover, for it is not meant for the prying eyes of jealous interferences! Your wonderful words always send me on delightful trips searching for pesonal meanings, dear N.

[Neville]

I am so happy that you found this my friend... many thanks for checking in and leaving such a lovely encouraging message.... N :)

[Mrudula Rani]

It is always a great pleasure to read your wonderful writings, dear Neville.

[Neville]

............ :) x

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know my friend. All things, we do. Demand some sort of payment. I liked the words written. Asked questions and create thoughts. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

On reflection, and I have had plenty of time to reflect, I think you are right my friend...Many thanks for checking in..... N

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this one and you are welcome my friend.

[Neville]

........... :) cheers N

[Crowley]

Well there is that, a blend of the utterly poetic and non-chalant perversity. You are the king of it you know. It why I love you.

[Neville]

Well I never Crowley, I have just come over all unnecessary and I thank you for it sir.... N :)