Popping Pills

"What are they"? Asked Alice of the White Rabbit "Aw, nothing much, just suck one and see" The White Rabbit replied....

Popping Pills

 

I hear there is an orange pill

Pop half

To cure almost any ill

 

Pop another half and boy oh boy

They say

That rainbow coloured sparrows fly

 

Pop two

And bang its over

The fat lady sings

Author's Note

Don't try this at home....Or anywhere else for that matter

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Why pop a pill to see rainbow coloured sparrows fly when you can marvel at the real thing,? But people do, because they like to challenge boundaries. I've never been a suck and see person, but I have certainly known many in my time and that fat lady keeps singing. She will always sing. Topical write Neville. Could sit and discuss this forever.

Chris

[Neville]

Me too..... cheers Chris.. N

[Crowley]

Isn't that always the case. Two isn't always better than one. I think I'll have some of those please, do they set well with vodka?

[Neville]

of course, and on all counts hic.. pardon me my luverly x

[Lyn Anderson]

I wish I could actually meet you. It would be totally "trippy" for you to read my similar poem in my dusty old binder - we could compare notes of when and where we wrote certain stuff. Yeah, a little weird for me, reading some of your stuff is like rummaging around in my back closet.

[Neville]

Sentiment well & truly reciprocated KL - I will read everything in time & who knows maybe we shall one day. N

[Joiedevivre]

haha! ah really great one! making a point and making you laugh, all in one breath, very nice.

[Neville]

Much appreciated Joiedevivre. All Good Things,

Neville

[Sami Khalil]

Popping pills might cause ecstasy or running wild fantacy in a world of falacy...A splendid poem...:)...................

[Neville]

Good on yer my dear Friend. AGT's N

[Sami Khalil]

AGT...All welcome...:).....................

[Neville]

Sami,

I think you were the first person to ever review any of my work here on Writerscafe & you were certainly my first accepted 'friend'. Your comments, opinions, interpretations and insights are always truly appreciated & ever welcome. Your Friend, N (not to mention AGT's)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)..................