All these Words
A Poem by
Neville
A take on the past with references to 2 personal literary hero's
All These Words
Of all these
words
Held in my head
Collectively reminiscent
Of some
Dylanesque
air-raid
Like splinters
From an old ship
wreck
As sharp as any
Cohen razor
blade
Nevertheless I
hasten to add
She will eventually
Get bored
She will also grow old
And whilst this might be hard to envisage
Right now
Be sure to try and understand
The fundamental law
That time is not a real friend
Of anyone
© 2013 Neville
Author's Note
Honesty is much more appreciated and otherwise appealing than bullshit and the mere desire to engineer a reciprocal review.... N
Featured Review
I shall not take issue with the loveliness of the poem, but will with the conclusion. Time is very much my friend, as it pushes me on, despite my tendency to linger, RL Stevensonlike, on the precious moments. The way ahead is hazardous, yes, and WONDERFUL.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Cor blimey guvnor, might I conclude that's at least a C+ then? All Good Things, my Friend, N
11 Years Ago
at least, dear heart
11 Years Ago
Cheers Dean, N
Reviews
I like the end. And it is not a friend, certainly, to most, but to some of us we grow wiser nonetheless.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I like the end. And it is not a friend, certainly, to most, but to some of us we grow wiser nonetheless.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Some of us do but not all of us my friend... Thank you for stopping by again.. N
I shall not take issue with the loveliness of the poem, but will with the conclusion. Time is very much my friend, as it pushes me on, despite my tendency to linger, RL Stevensonlike, on the precious moments. The way ahead is hazardous, yes, and WONDERFUL.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I shall not take issue with the loveliness of the poem, but will with the conclusion. Time is very much my friend, as it pushes me on, despite my tendency to linger, RL Stevensonlike, on the precious moments. The way ahead is hazardous, yes, and WONDERFUL.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Cor blimey guvnor, might I conclude that's at least a C+ then? All Good Things, my Friend, N
11 Years Ago
at least, dear heart
11 Years Ago
Cheers Dean, N
I enjoyed this poem, beautiful words with great meanings :) well done! The last 2 line are my favorite :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I enjoyed this poem, beautiful words with great meanings :) well done! The last 2 line are my favorite :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you my friend, my pleasure entirely, N
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Added on November 10, 2013
Last Updated on November 10, 2013
Author
Neville Gone West folks....., United Kingdom
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