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Hey Jude

Hey Jude

A Poem by Neville
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PMH Fond Recollections

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Hey Jude

 

Hey Jude

Remember 1976

 

Talk about hot

You came to my room at 20.35

Smelling vaguely of hospital disinfectant

 

And

 

I distinctly recall your blue uniform

Was cut no more than three fingers above the knee

All for the sake of modesty and Matrons law

 

Talk about tight though

 

When you eventually left

You took a trace of my DNA wrapped in your hair

Which you saved in an old opaque bottle

 

Then

 

Before blowing a kiss and waving goodbye

From the doorway

You placed your thumb print firmly against

The dark rose coloured lens I so often peered through 

 

Hey Jude

From behind in 1976

 

You had the most perfect form and without any exaggeration

Proved far too accommodating by half

 

Sadly  

 

 You will always have to be

Just a little bit more than a pleasantry and remain

A mere finger tip out of reach

 

Is it any wonder then I recollect so well

Both you and the sun simultaneously going down on me

To the strains of Norwegian Wood

 

Hey Jude

Do you too remember 1976

?

 

© 2016 Neville


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Great songs .. both Hey Jude and Norwegian Wood .. two of their best for me, anyway .. you have given Nursing a really good bad name my friend. Just as well many men's fantasy as it is a memory .. did she ever give you a jingle? ........ on the tele? :)
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I'm surprised you haven't guessed, read or heard already just how norty I can be .. Cheers b.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

your a bad bad boy! Slainte!
Neville

3 Years Ago


.................................. Slainte



Reviews

Hey Jude is a great song.

Wow I’m so glad the nurses don’t wear uniforms like that anymore. Impractical and seductive. Sounds like quite the nursing experience. Sultry and passionate but you most likely wouldn’t get the extra care these days (wink)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I thank you PB and I thank you kindly .. a long time ago now though so I thank you too for b.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

We all have those fun crazy and even heartbreaking tales
Not knowing about the songs Einstein Noodle spoke of I enjoyed the story in itself. The details to the rip and the hue of the Rose's you look through. Well penned. It left a longing at the end, for the poem was good. Tyfs

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I dont know why it took so long for me to find your note on this old scribble of mine Cypria.. read more
Interesting poem about a nice fling. I enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NotUsinganymore

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. I posted a new poem! Please check it out c:
Neville

3 Years Ago


.. despite checking & double checking, I can not find your new poem ..
NotUsinganymore

3 Years Ago

there is a new one now c:
Ah, the song "Hey Jude" was number one back in the day of me being new and I even dated a Jude in the long long ago, but I never found anything to write about, other than her incessant (too incessant) reminder that St Jude is the patron saint of lost causes.
I'm sure there's something to learn from that, but still don't know what she was talking about. I think you got the better deal mate. 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


No doubt about it mate .. and we are still friends :)
Great music Neville and this skit reminded me of Benny Hill Show with nurses in suspenders with ample cleavage bursting out of their tops and tight skirts. All rather delightful and wicked. One thing is for sure the music lives on.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


thankyou Andrew .. I can assure you sir it was nothing like that at all .. it was just rathe.. read more
Great songs .. both Hey Jude and Norwegian Wood .. two of their best for me, anyway .. you have given Nursing a really good bad name my friend. Just as well many men's fantasy as it is a memory .. did she ever give you a jingle? ........ on the tele? :)
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I'm surprised you haven't guessed, read or heard already just how norty I can be .. Cheers b.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

your a bad bad boy! Slainte!
Neville

3 Years Ago


.................................. Slainte
This was awesome. So smart and clever, subtle and direct at the same time. Sometimes you can be dirty without really getting down.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

10 Years Ago

Praise indeed. Wow thanks my increasingly dear friend. I must confess, this one is not based on anyt.. read more

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