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I

Used

To

 Look

 For

  Rainbows

 

In

 Those

 Tears

 As

 They

 Fell

 

Into

 That

 Tiny

 Saline

 Reservoir

 

Of

 Your

 Navel

 I

 Once

 Knew

 So

 Very

Well

 

I

  Also

 Searched

 For

 Secrets

Hidden

 In

 Your

 Eyes

 

And

Those

 Tucked

 Behind

 That

 Mirror

 I

 Have

 Since

 Grown

 To

 Despise

 

     

 

© 2013 Neville


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Wow. I don't know what I was expecting when I stumbled across this piece, but this throws my expectations entirely away. This for sure exceeded them, and it's rare I found a piece that feels like something I would attempt to write. This is so, so, gorgeous and beautiful and I just love the whole thing. (:

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some rea.. read more
Vertigo Cat1111

3 Years Ago

It's no problem! It happens at times. (:
Neville

3 Years Ago


I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people h.. read more



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What a touchable poem, it's touched my heart. I liked the words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

I am touched, thanks, N
"I

Used

To

Look

For

Rainbows



In

Those

Tears

As

They

Fell "

This poem is soooo romantic although a bit sad. The form too is outstanding...:)
AGT


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Cheers Sami,

Yeah, AGT's N
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Cheers...AGT
You are welcome...:)...........

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Added on October 30, 2013
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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