Wow. I don't know what I was expecting when I stumbled across this piece, but this throws my expectations entirely away. This for sure exceeded them, and it's rare I found a piece that feels like something I would attempt to write. This is so, so, gorgeous and beautiful and I just love the whole thing. (:
How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some rea.. read more
How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some reason, your words of encouragement failed to trigger the usual notification ... Many thanks and All Good Things,
Neville ...
Oh' and do keep writing .. I shall visit your posts very soon :)
3 Years Ago
It's no problem! It happens at times. (:
3 Years Ago
I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people h.. read more
I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people have notified the administrator .. we shall have to see whether these glitches improve .......... N
Wow. I don't know what I was expecting when I stumbled across this piece, but this throws my expectations entirely away. This for sure exceeded them, and it's rare I found a piece that feels like something I would attempt to write. This is so, so, gorgeous and beautiful and I just love the whole thing. (:
How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some rea.. read more
How very kind you are.. please accept my apology for not responding before now, for some reason, your words of encouragement failed to trigger the usual notification ... Many thanks and All Good Things,
Neville ...
Oh' and do keep writing .. I shall visit your posts very soon :)
3 Years Ago
It's no problem! It happens at times. (:
3 Years Ago
I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people h.. read more
I believe the Café has a few gremlins at the moment .. as far as I am aware, a few people have notified the administrator .. we shall have to see whether these glitches improve .......... N
wow! love the very intimate, romantic heart of this and your turn is killer sir! top notch says i! really hit me ... years of a relationship that brought tears .. yet long striving to keep finding those rainbows in it .. reality strikes home ... heartbreaking mistake acknowledged .. the image of tears falling into her navel and looking for rainbows is so powerful says i... so glad i did not miss this ... top o' the mahrnin' to ya Nev! ... i also think the form fits the "falling" so well ... felt me self tumbling head long after V2
E.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
.. your thoughts and words above mean far more to me today Gene than I shall probably ever l.. read more
.. your thoughts and words above mean far more to me today Gene than I shall probably ever let on .. I am however, massively grateful to you my friend ..
Neville
3 Years Ago
i think it a very real love story ... going to be thinking of those rainbows today for sure ;)
... it is absolutely one of those based on nowt but fact .. cheers mate .. shall raise my pi.. read more
... it is absolutely one of those based on nowt but fact .. cheers mate .. shall raise my pint pot to you this coming Sunday @ 12.30 ish my time :)
3 Years Ago
that would be about the time i get up in the wee hours wouldn't it? at any rate .. i am with you .. .. read morethat would be about the time i get up in the wee hours wouldn't it? at any rate .. i am with you .. one pint pot Sunday ... slainte!
3 Years Ago
down ya neck buddy ............. just a quick un and then you can hit the sack again ... may.. read more
down ya neck buddy ............. just a quick un and then you can hit the sack again ... maybe ....................... slainte sir :)
are You talking about aging dear Neville? I must say I didn't expect the ending at all, also that it's really sad but the well-written words here make it beautiful, rainbows and tears? that's something really creative and very lovely, always there is hope even though tears isn't it? :)
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
.. looking back, I think I may have just surprised my self with that unexpected ending maybe.. read more
.. looking back, I think I may have just surprised my self with that unexpected ending maybe .. your visit tho' makes it a happier start to today .. and I do thank you for it :)
Another old poem out for an airing. So good to give them a breath of fresh air, blow the cobwebs away and give new people an opportunity to read them. Well I am far from new but reading something years later you can always find something else to say. That bloomin mirror has got alot to answer for and there were plenty of hidden secrets here. I couldn't help feeling that the format of your lines resembled a sharp knife :) Your lines were not happy ones.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Yes, another old un .... thanks Chris .. sometimes a little sunlight and a breath of fresh a.. read more
Yes, another old un .... thanks Chris .. sometimes a little sunlight and a breath of fresh air can make all the difference cant it ........... Neville :)
A little sunlight where there has been prolonged rainfall and a breath of fresh air where the air h.. read moreA little sunlight where there has been prolonged rainfall and a breath of fresh air where the air has grown stale can make a huge difference. For some reason your response took me back to the morning after one of my Mum and Dad's many parties when I was in my early teens. Couldn't wait to get all the windows and doors open. Get the sunlight in and a good strong breeze to take away the smell of beer dregs and f*g smoke..Good morning Neville.
3 Years Ago
....... I do seriously get ya ... my folks had parties like that .. boy could I tell a tale .. read more
....... I do seriously get ya ... my folks had parties like that .. boy could I tell a tale or two ... but then, I imagine a lot of us could ...........
This is a tender poem. Tears are a way to the soul to cleanse unwanted pain.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
.. an intriguing thought & who am I to argue .. I am prepared to thank you though & do .. th.. read more
.. an intriguing thought & who am I to argue .. I am prepared to thank you though & do .. thank you PB and truly ..
Beautiful that you looked and felt so deep with truth of heart and soul- just sad that they don’t seem to have been worthy of it- it would’ve been so much easier if we could foresee the future to prevent heartache and pain- wonderful words you use - meaningful🌹
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
my goodness me... ta a lot... nah ta muchly.......N
I’m not a fan of this formatting, my friend, as it’s a choppy read. I lose the flow of what your graceful words are conveying. But I do very much like your message, especially the ending part about the mirror. As always with your writing, this is filled with imagination & feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Sorry for the delay in getting back to ya Margie.... I understand completely...not everyone's cuppa .. read moreSorry for the delay in getting back to ya Margie.... I understand completely...not everyone's cuppa tea but am gonna nug ya anyway...... N
This poem speaks to me of a beautiful romantic love. Rainbows are so uplifting, but then I pick up on something else completely, a change in emotion. Secrets, searching, and something to do with that mirror and what was tucked behind it. Your short poem gives me pictures, of different situations. I got my own movie from it. That's good poetry. Thank you and good morning Neville.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
You are far too generous for words Christine so will just say thank you & mean it........ Neville