You have transported me to some wonderfully exotic location. There is some superb imagery here Neville and also a lesson for the kids. Pause and take notice of the natural environment and soak it all up. Love your final stanza. Yes the sky is another ocean :) A very welcome poem, on a dull, cold day. You brought me blue skies and heat. Now a gin and tonic would just make it ideal.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
How cool is that... written either in Vinales, or Havana Cuba both beautiful.. thank you dear Chris... read moreHow cool is that... written either in Vinales, or Havana Cuba both beautiful.. thank you dear Chris.. have that gin on me.. N :)
I am also transported . . . living in a beautiful place here myself, I rarely dream about other beautiful places, so you've turned me on to a new view with attitude! Always love the way you look at the world & then share it with us (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Margie, a much appreciated visit and a super point of view if you don't mind me sayin ((NU.. read moreThank you Margie, a much appreciated visit and a super point of view if you don't mind me sayin ((NUGS)) fondly back at ya.. N:)
dear Neville... Inlove your dolphin and the porpoise of the skies. All our feathered friends descend from perches where true beauty lies. Kids from around the world can enjoy the beauty of the feathered birds who decorate our hearts with lessons of survival and determination. truly, Pat
Stop and smell the roses in a tropical locale....Cuba? Not sure I want to travel there, but maybe someday. Give me Aruba or Curacao. Such a happy write....now I want to go on a cruise! Lydi**
have you gone to Havana, Neville? first off...love the call to us kids ;) who can resist such an invitation .. and ahhhhhhhh Havana ... romance the mob and Castro :))) ohhhh so many great Havana movies ... you put me there my friend .. marvelous colors and scenes .. just hop that Delta frigate and I'm there eh!? your closing three lines for me are spectacular my friend!! thanks for sharing your wonderful poem ... adults can come too right!??? :)))))))))))))))))))))
E.
Hiya my friend, yes I have been to Cuba, twice in fact and yes again, tis beautiful, a land of contr.. read moreHiya my friend, yes I have been to Cuba, twice in fact and yes again, tis beautiful, a land of contrasts, quite beautiful contrasts.. always found the people very inviting, and friendly.. always wanted to go while Castro was alive and of course, we did.. those birds are really spectacular.. the only other place I have seen them is in the skies of Colombia.. another friend of the US.. my only regret as far as Cuba was concerned is that I had quit smoking and always fancied a hand rolled Cuban cigar and mohito on a balcony in Havana... Yes.. adults are most welcome.. thank you so much for these smashing words my friend and good mane to ya.... Neville :)
6 Years Ago
you know.... i think you should light up my friend! you don't HAVE to inhale you know :))))))))))))).. read moreyou know.... i think you should light up my friend! you don't HAVE to inhale you know :))))))))))))))))
I love sitting on the beach and watching the birds soar on the thermals. So relaxing. My place to do it is Isla Holbox Mexico. I raise a cerveza to you my friend and go back to my bird watching
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Good to hear from you Crowley & cheers my friend... N:)