Dali’s Eyes

For someone who was once more than very special...

Dali’s Eyes

 

I want to see

The world through 

Dali's eyes

And write 

Like Hemmingway

To share the blues 

And greens

And all the in-betweens

And to take your breath away

Author's Note

enjoy but do not try to second guess, okay

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

An oldie out for an airing. Many would like to write like Hemmingway. His writing has depth to it. Yours does too Neville. Now Dali certainly sees the world with different eyes. When you look at his paintings you certainly see things in a different light. An acquired taste methinks. Your second stanza is quite lovely. Blues and greens are a fine combination. Makes me think of sky and trees and they are certainly worth looking at.

Chris

[Neville]

thanking you so really Chris this surreal Sunday...

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Neville. Have a great day.

[AJNJ]

I wish I could write like this. Always wanted to be a breathtaking writer. Simple, and hitting home in a few choice words like you did here!

[Neville]

my word PJ... how bloomin kind of you my friend.. you just made me evening sir... Cheers :)

[AJNJ]

It's a pleasure to read your poetry! Always a takeaway for me. I hope you're planning a great weekend sir. :)

[Neville]

You are so very kind, cheers.

New windows being fitted today and my daughter and her partner are coming for lunch tomorrow my friend.. Stay safe, and creative PJ..

Neville

[AJNJ]

I missed the good news! Wow! I hope a good time was had!
And I hope the new windows look fab. I'm so into interiors! Great going sir!

[Neville]

All went well & all is good, thank you :)

[AJNJ]

Most welcome dear sir :)

[Neville]

................. cheers :)

[AJNJ]

Cheers...,...🤗.......!

[moog-drika]

Ahh to share the blues and greens and all the in-betweens!
Love the line. Gives me the vibe of the sky, the grass-filled ground and everything between them. I find the vision very colorful.

[Neville]

then I thank you most kindly dear lady, for your visit and your vision...

Neville :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too my friend. I would want to be Leonard Cohen. Can sing the poetry with honor. Hello my friend and I hope you are doing well. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

Hello & thank you my friend.. I am doing okay.. sincerely hope you are too Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

This is good and you are welcome my friend.

[Light and ashes]

Well, this took my breath away.......
A great write, well done, Neville.

[Neville]

Thanking you kindly, bigly and true Allie B.. :)

[Light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[duff]

This is awesome! By far one of my favorite artists and it would be wild to see the world through Salvador's eyes. It might be overwhelming, lol. Nice work!

[Neville]

How extraordinarily kind.. Many thank you's my friend :)

[barleygirl]

To me, the most interesting exercise in writing is to try on different points of view. Your poem reminds me to open up my viewpoints & embrace ideas which are hard for me to embrace (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

then that makes these words of yours even more special.. thank you Margie (NUGs) fondly, Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Dunno about second guessing but breathless indeed is this powerfully worded and colourful intention to declare in depth the feelings of sharing with someone special .............. x

[Neville]

aw... thanks Fay and muchly so...

[Patricia Wedel]

Flowers do take my breath away in a romantic way.
Wishing you a happy Spring. truly, Pat

[Neville]

Hey, thank you Pat and the very same to you my friend..........Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

You have an exceptional taste and extraordinary style of writing. you have earned your place on your own in many of our hearts with your gentle and kindest manner.I am sure that special some one is in awe of you already.

[Neville]

And you are far too kind my friend........

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you. Abraço