Will Your Canvas Ever Dry?

Will Your Canvas Ever Dry?

 

I

Kiss

Your

Eyes

They

Leave

Warm

Oil

Taste

On

My

Lips

.

Will

Your

Canvas

Ever

Dry

?

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

Great title - it captures the imagination, your format leads the reader and your poem is fresh and inventive.

[Neville]

Many thanks Cherrie for your very kind and encouraging review. All Good Things, Neville

[Leslie Philibert]

The first poem I have read from Neville, and I look forward to reading more

[Neville]

Thank you for stopping by Leslie, your time and kind words are much appreciated. All Good Things, Neville

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Neat concept Neville!

[Neville]

Hey, many thanks my friend. All Good Things, Neville

[New Dawn]

Wow I loved this sensuous write neville, so much conveyed and in such unusual style :)

[Neville]

Thank you so very much, your views are as always greatly appreciated. AGT's Neville

[lee von cleef]

chip, crack ,fade, Madam X, Singer's New Orleans gal,and now you have kissed her too.

[Neville]

Much appreciated my Friend, all Good Things, N

[Chris]

I admit I didn't get your aesthetic... but I liked the thought and the tonals.

[Neville]

Phew, well at least I will sleep tonight - All Good Things, N

[Jack Dawkins]

Nice! How can it ever dry if it is constantly evolving as are your lips or is it your brush?

[Neville]

Nice one Jack, one may never know for sure & I guess there is sometimes more fun or pleasure in the uncertainty of some things. Your comments are much appreciated ans I will reciprocate very shortly. All Good Things, neville

[R J Askew]

I love the idea of of the canvas never drying, never dying either maybe. If only we cld be like that, always fresh n alive.

[Neville]

Yeah, if all things were equal, that concept would be great but I can't help thinking of Juicy Jack, Skinny & Ibram whom I had the privalige of meeting recently & then I think, "well may be not" - I am also suffering from bereavement overload hence the drying up of literary creativity. I am still reading WS's though. N

[Katherine]

I love how the words

drip

down

the

page

[Neville]

Thank you for your observation & comment, my very soon to be friend, All Good Things, N