Will Your Canvas Ever Dry?

Will Your Canvas Ever Dry?

A Poem by Neville

Will Your Canvas Ever Dry?

 

I

Kiss

Your

Eyes

They

Leave

Warm

Oil

Taste

On

My

Lips

.

Will

Your

Canvas

Ever

Dry

?

© 2012 Neville


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Great title - it captures the imagination, your format leads the reader and your poem is fresh and inventive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Many thanks Cherrie for your very kind and encouraging review. All Good Things, Neville
The first poem I have read from Neville, and I look forward to reading more

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by Leslie, your time and kind words are much appreciated. All Good Things, Ne.. read more
Neat concept Neville!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Hey, many thanks my friend. All Good Things, Neville
Wow I loved this sensuous write neville, so much conveyed and in such unusual style :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, your views are as always greatly appreciated. AGT's Neville
chip, crack ,fade, Madam X, Singer's New Orleans gal,and now you have kissed her too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Much appreciated my Friend, all Good Things, N
I admit I didn't get your aesthetic... but I liked the thought and the tonals.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Phew, well at least I will sleep tonight - All Good Things, N
Nice! How can it ever dry if it is constantly evolving as are your lips or is it your brush?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Nice one Jack, one may never know for sure & I guess there is sometimes more fun or pleasure in the .. read more
I love the idea of of the canvas never drying, never dying either maybe. If only we cld be like that, always fresh n alive.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Yeah, if all things were equal, that concept would be great but I can't help thinking of Juicy Jack,.. read more
I love how the words

drip

down

the

page

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your observation & comment, my very soon to be friend, All Good Things, N

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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