Painfully Yours

She asked me for a love poem, I gave her these words & that was it, over.......

Painfully Yours

 

Now there’s pain

 

And there is pain

 

She said

 

Practice daily

 

Until you perfect the art

 

Perfect the art

 

She said

 

Then all women

 

Whoever and wherever

 

They might be shall want you

Author's Note

To the best of my knowledge, no woman was ever hurt during the course of making this.......

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

might be taken on the surface .. too lightly ... but here he presents himself with his poem .."Painfully your" ... oh how many ways it can be taken ... to many to number says i .. and she in reply says ... you don't know nothin' buddy ... but if you work at it ..perhaps you will come close ... for me here is the woman .. she is all women .. who know pain more deeply than men can feel ... we simply are too glib, callous and simple minded to appreciate the subtle nuances of pain ... i love this poem sir! its an open canvas within a framework to guide ones start ... like it a lot sir!
E.

[Neville]

I can hardly thank you enough Gene.. I sincerely hope a massive thank you friend will suffice... THANK YOU FRIEND.... N

[Einstein Noodle]

i feel you Nev! and back at ya ... i'll tip me daily pint with you today sir! cheers ... :)

[Neville]

I will certainly drink to that... cheers sir :))

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem . Deep thoughts.

[Neville]

Many thanks Sami, your comment is much appreciated. All Good Things, Neville

[Sami Khalil]

Keep up the good works and comments. Thank you...