Her Four Seasons

Four Haiku written for Beginning Haiku Class, one for each season, written in a more classic style rather then a contemporary one.

her night robes

silver in the night is the enchanted mizuki

scented pink are the petals of sakura

 

steps retreat

dew in my robe

summer lovers are sweet as plums

 

koukyou appears

rustle of kimono

peek beneath momiji boughs

 

icy steps

pine scents the air

trace the garden path under my geta

Reviews

[bobc]

I much like short poetry and yours are particularly nice to read. BTW, I didn't think you intended to repeat 'of' in the third line? Thanx...bobc