Seriatim silences

Whisper again
The refrain of forgiving
The amble of compassion
Arcanum to living


Seriatim silences
Hold fast my obloquy
Caught in the gaze
Of my captors lucidity

Foundling am I
Compunction of shadows
Dining on lies
A thoughtless farrago

Whisper again
The litany of passages
Appellation of peace
The tenderest of messages

 

Reviews

[Charles]

Finally got around to looking at some of your writing. This one is very interesting. Obscure words chosen to highlight more common ones and perhaps pull more meaning out of them. Like refrain (not so obscure) of forgiving - the juxtaposition had me going back and forth, back and forth and 'forgiving' each time. I guess this is experimental stuff in a way - the juxtaposition being an experiemnt in not sound, but meaning. Do I read too much into this - I guess that would be a colloquium of ideas. Very nice writing.

[zogzog]

this is an interesting work nev....the end was a little differant then what i was expecting....i like it