Love to pure

A love to pure to go to waste, has been given the chance to give and say but she doesnt know what to do so instead she turns away not knowing what she did, she threw her heart away a voice inside calls out, begging her not to let go, to the chance God gave to let others know; how pure one heart can be inside, but when bought to the surface, she turns to hide. Cause the world we live in is so evil still, but endly she gives us a love anyone has yet to reveal. A love to pure to go to waste, took her chance to give and say. Now she lives and now she breaths in our world to which evil leads. her love was to pure to go to waste but she threw her heart away and now its too late. The voice inside no longer prays her not to let go and by these actions we are aware and know...   In time, denying your heart's existance, stangnant  she will grow

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[Kaotic Barbie]

This was very emotional. VERY WELL written. I saw some mistakes (which some people make big deals about on here) But to me it's all about how one person describes their true feelings in the poem. Which you did wonderfully!