Black rose

another one of my poems

Your breathing

Barely heard

So beautiful

There is no word

Never certain

Always mysterious

Your look

So serious

It hurts

To touch

Though never too little

Never too much

You are

The one I chose

You are

My black rose

Author's Note

The picture is something I painted myself (okay I had an example on the computer screen..). But it's what inspired this poem.

Reviews

[M.a. Benjamin]

Good write. You rhyme very well in this piece, almost like the chorus to a song.

[BELLA]

that was rally good

[Loner]

Beautiful thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

The description was amazing. The artwork was beautiful. A outstanding poem with strength and power in your words.
Coyote

[Crowley]

Nice stuff. Very simple and to the point but beautiful and graceful in that simplicity. I loved it.