I'm sorry
A Poem by
NeverSurrender
A poem about wanting the person you love back after you've hurt them.
Forgive me, I’m sorry
Let me wipe away the tear from your eye
I’d do anything for you to stay
Don’t go, don’t let this be goodbye
It’s my fault, I’m sorry
I had to do what had to be done
I beg you not to end
What has only just began
Come closer, I’m sorry
Give me one more chance to make it okay
Let me hold you one more time
And the pain I’ve caused will go away
© 2010 NeverSurrender
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Reviews
I really enjoyed reading this :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
I really liked this! Great structure and placement of words. It really struck a heart-string.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I really liked this! Great structure and placement of words. It really struck a heart-string.
My sentiments at the moment. I like how you say it just begun.
Posted 11 Years Ago
My sentiments at the moment. I like how you say it just begun.
you really write very well...simple,understandable...sometimes saying sorry is much difficult then it looks...but after doing all this we can try to solve problems:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
you really write very well...simple,understandable...sometimes saying sorry is much difficult then it looks...but after doing all this we can try to solve problems:)
You can really sense your pain and regret in this piece. Very well written!
Posted 14 Years Ago
You can really sense your pain and regret in this piece. Very well written!
You will like the song soon as I get home
by Faith evens
This poem reminds me of this song
Great write
Posted 14 Years Ago
You will like the song soon as I get home
by Faith evens
This poem reminds me of this song
Great write
I really liked this. Great word choice and the rhymes worked really well in the poem's favor. Great write!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I really liked this. Great word choice and the rhymes worked really well in the poem's favor. Great write!
Could feel the hurt in your heart.........well done.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Could feel the hurt in your heart.........well done.
dont know what you got til its gone.... i can relate to this
Posted 14 Years Ago
dont know what you got til its gone.... i can relate to this
Poem is very good. The desire to make peace and hold on is strong in your words.A excellent poem. Sometime we learn too late to appreciate the good things we have in a life.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
Poem is very good. The desire to make peace and hold on is strong in your words.A excellent poem. Sometime we learn too late to appreciate the good things we have in a life.
Coyote
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Added on December 24, 2009
Last Updated on May 1, 2010
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love ,
hurt ,
lover ,
sorry
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