I'm sorry

A poem about wanting the person you love back after you've hurt them.

Forgive me, I’m sorry

Let me wipe away the tear from your eye

I’d do anything for you to stay

Don’t go, don’t let this be goodbye

 

It’s my fault, I’m sorry

I had to do what had to be done

I beg you not to end

What has only just began

 

Come closer, I’m sorry

Give me one more chance to make it okay

Let me hold you one more time

And the pain I’ve caused will go away

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Vera Fnk]

I really enjoyed reading this :)

[SydneyBrown]

I really liked this! Great structure and placement of words. It really struck a heart-string.

[Parsimony]

My sentiments at the moment. I like how you say it just begun.

[Akshat♥]

you really write very well...simple,understandable...sometimes saying sorry is much difficult then it looks...but after doing all this we can try to solve problems:)

[Hayles]

You can really sense your pain and regret in this piece. Very well written!

[Orlando Murcia]

You will like the song soon as I get home
by Faith evens

This poem reminds me of this song

Great write

[Lexi]

I really liked this. Great word choice and the rhymes worked really well in the poem's favor. Great write!

[larryb]

Could feel the hurt in your heart.........well done.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

dont know what you got til its gone.... i can relate to this

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. The desire to make peace and hold on is strong in your words.A excellent poem. Sometime we learn too late to appreciate the good things we have in a life.
Coyote