I fear them

I fear them
Because they hunt me in my dreams
And when they take my soul
Nobody hears my screams

 

I fear them
Because nobody has my back
When they're forming their army
Ready to attack

 

I fear them
When I see them under my bed
But I fear them most
Because they only exist in my head

Author's Note

Short but sweet?

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

Beautiful imagery, repetition, rhyme, and rhythm. You have got a perfect style mastered. Although it is short, it is better than trying to lenghten something that with only more words will just get longer: not better. Once again, wonderful. Captivating opening in the first stanza: "I fear them Because they hunt me in my dreams And when they take my soul Nobody hears my screams."
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
gionelly*KiSS

[Coyote Poetry]

Those monsters and demons chasing us. I like this poem. My monsters are pressure to get things done. A excellent poem. Description and story was very good.
Coyote

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Wow you have hit the nail on the head, to the point, not too many imagery, but the flow and sense compensate for the little imagery, good technique

[HorrorMaster]

Yes very sweet