Useless(version 2)

Useless(version 2)

A Poem by CoveredInLies

I am just this
Lost and abused with no real use
I can not find what I am meant for
I am confused

I am alone with my thoughts
My own mental abuse
I am not worth it
I am not worth anything

I crack at the seams
From breaking my dreams
There is no hope for me
My cracks begin on the inside

© 2012 CoveredInLies


Author's Note

CoveredInLies
I had already posted this before, but when I went back and read it I didn't like the flow and felt I needed to change just a few words. I feel it really just magnified what I was saying before, just with better words.

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This version flows a lot better than the other one. I definitely prefer the changes you made in the last stanza of this one. The second to last line needs to be edited, though. I think you meant "hope 'for' me".

Posted 12 Years Ago



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CoveredInLies
CoveredInLies

Agawam, MA



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I am young. Twenty one to be exact. Most of the time I feel like I am too young to know what I do. Too inexperienced to handle it. Other times I feel as if I am too old to act the way I do. I am stuc.. more..

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