Murder

That criminal mind who strangled her blue

That criminal mind that cut her body in two

That criminal mind that cast them into the sea

That criminal mind is none other than me

Reviews

[Teenage Romeo]

ahahahahahhahahahahahaha......

[Rasputin]

You were able to take an inherently gruesome act, most likely driven by malice and mental disturbance, and effectively boil it down to four lines. In rhyme, no less. Well played, madam.

[Aravind]

Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Never expected the "me" Threw me off guard completely!! Awesome touch at the end.. Keep it going!

Nice work with the repetition too.. (the ending completely bedazzled)

[THE Super Hero]

Woah, I must say, I really enjoyed this poem! I love the repetitive element that you used and the mystery that you have added. Not of the killers identity, but who was the victim, why did they die, what is the real story?
It's wonderful!