Sleeps

The sleepy z's
Slowly creep apon my mind
Making my eye lids heavy
Forcing me to fight against them
Letting out a light murr
I plead for some sleepys and a cuddle buddy
Hold me close
Dont let the monsters get me
Hold me for life
And death
I wont let you down
I promise
Slowly fading into a world of darkness
And pure bliss
Sleep has descended.

~
Summer-Skye

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[MomzillaNC]

At one time or another, we've all laid abed and desperately wanted to sleep, but couldn't put the troubles and darkness out of our mind. And every lonely soul has prayed for someone to fill that need. You capture those states in your poem.

A few minor edits:
The sleepy z's
Slowly creep [upon] my mind
Making my eye lids heavy
Forcing me to fight against them [maybe add "closing"]
Letting out a light murr (terrific use of the term meaning: linguistic surrogate to stand in for emotion that cannot be put into words.)
I plead for some [sleepy] and a cuddle buddy
Hold me close
[Don't] let the monsters get me
Hold me for life
[Until] death
I [won't] let you down
I promise
Slowly fading into a world of darkness
And pure bliss
Sleep has descended.

~
Summer-Skye