Sleeping Sick

I woke
This afternoon
Rolled over
Opened my mouth
And let out
A
Pained whimper
Realizing
You werent there
-
I woke up
And wished that I didnt
-
I woke up
Between a sick state
Half there
Half not
-
Rolled back over
And fell into
A slumber
-
But the worst part is
Your not there..

~
Summer-Skye

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the internal thoughts and description in the poem. You create lonely place and sadness of waking alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Hawk Flight]

Damn that just left me sad... This is good. That pain... jeesh Its so real that It made me feel it. ~shivers~.

[Nevaeh Flight]

That's my world :/