Beating

Hold My Beating Bleeding Broken Heart,
In The Palms Of Your Hands,
Feel The Life,
Pour Out Of It,
With Each Beat,
Feel My Faith,
Fall To The Ground,
In Sheets Of Red,
Rivers Of Salt,
Leaking Out,
My Sanity.

~
Summer-Skye

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

This remindmed me about the first years of IT studies when everybody was trying to stick out through font or formatting that is until the devoloper comes and says to you times of new courier and font 12 or marks down. Unless you are using a software tthat is doing for you inwhich case why. I struggle to see the added value. The words come at you bouncing full of meaning , it is intense, aggitated emotion and as if an outpour or a confession.

Intense.

Thankyou

[Nevaeh Flight]

I use to write all my poems in Caps, but someone told me it was distracting so I stopped but some times I forget and slip. But thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it ^-^

[Hawk Flight]

that is.. intense... damn. very good I liked it.

[Nevaeh Flight]

Thank you :))

[Hawk Flight]

no problem Little LF