Red Eyes

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His eyes flicker over to dark dangerous red
Something deep and dark is stirring around in his chest
Something normal people would fear
The red hue in his eyes spark my interest, cue the curiosity
Reaching my fragile fingers out
Pressing them to his cheek
Running my fingers in his soft silver fur
I begin to purr
My bright blue eyes looking deep down into his harsh red ones
Giving him a silent challenge
Biting my lip I gently pet his cheek
Soft lovingly
I know the demons deep down within his battered soul
I know the night terrors he faces
But he knows
I won't ever hurt him
With just the simplest of touches
His body grows weak
Looking up at me as the hues of red fade away to a place I will never know
Those beautiful blue eyes
Are back at home to match up perfectly with mine
You see this is my love
This is my nightmare
He is my everything
And I will hold him dear
And tangle my fears
Right up into his
There is nothing stronger then love
And this is tale of his red eyes

-Summer

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem felt like a secret whisper. I like the tone of the poem leading to the every good ending.
"There is nothing stronger then love
And this is tale of his red eyes "
I like the line above. Strong and beautiful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nevaeh Flight]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :))

[ron]

Very nice. I love how you take the reader through your thoughts. Love this one. Nicely written

[Nevaeh Flight]

Danke Dear, it's about my bf and his eyes changing colors and whatnot. :)

[ron]

His eyes change color? Wow that is so cool. Mine do sometimes but not like this.

[Nevaeh Flight]

Yes they do! :)))

[ron]

Your love for him is so strong -sighs- you are very lucky young lady to have found such love. I hope he knows how much you love him.

[Nevaeh Flight]

You have no idea what iv gone through to be with him. I have fought and fought and fought. And now that I'm of age. I don't have fight anymore and he knows I love him, he knows that I would do anything for him. ^-^

[ron]

I understand what you are going through...trust me.

[Nevaeh Flight]

-pats his head- if you say so (:

[ron]

Try to think back at the first moment you realized you love him.
Sometimes we lose sight, Think back to how he made you heart beat, the first words he spoke that stole your heart. You have loved him for so long, do not give up the faith of your love for him, now is the time when your love will be tested the most.