Holding Me

Holding Me

A Poem by Sunset Girl

I felt it
That night
When I couldn't sleep
When I wanted to cry
When I needed the comfort

I felt it
So strong
Like never before
Like someone was there
Had their arms around me
Saying "it's ok"

I felt it
Felt someone
Holding me

I thought of him
Maybe somehow
He knew
And after all this time
He thought of me
Knew I needed him

Or maybe
It was someone greater
Someone you knows
My every thought
my every need

I felt it
I felt held
Held so tight
Like they'd never
Let me go

To be held
If only for while
To put me to sleep
To know it's ok
To feel that comfort
Even
If only a sense
of it

© 2013 Sunset Girl


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Sunset Girl
I didn't proof anything here, just wrote.

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~ oh, this is just so beautiful and comforting... i know this feeling really well... it's empowering and makes one feel less alone... you expressed it beautifully... ~ you're an expert at writing apparently simple poems that are incredibly perceptive and profound...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sunset Girl

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I sometimes find it hard to find just the right the words to make the.. read more
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11 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome...

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Writing can help one express what they can't seem to explain verbally. My poems are mostly about life, love and relationships. I started writing more when I thought people just wouldn't understand me.. more..

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