No Where

Run and run

Go and go

It seems I never stop

 

But when I look

Around to see

How far I got,

I feel as if

I haven’t moved at all

 

No matter the speed

No matter the effort

Nothing seems to move

 

There’s still that list

A mile long

That pile

Only grow

 

As the list

Gets longer

The pile grows

It feels

More and more

Like a hopeless race

 

I run and run

Go and go

But it seems

I’m getting nowhere.

Author's Note

Sometimes life just seems like a treadmill...

Reviews

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~ you're right... and you've expressed that feeling brilliantly... each and every word of this piece narrates your experience powerfully... i get this feeling a lot... slowly, i've begun to surrender to time... to relax a bit... to spend some more time writing... we can trigger changes... but there are some changes that happen on their own... and patience is definitely a virtue... so i focus on each day... and try to live it well...

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

joss!