Miss You Not Us
A Poem by Sunset Girl
It’s been hard
Without you
Today I missed you
More than normal
But I didn’t miss “us”
I only missed “you”
Having you there
Being myself
Our conversations
The openness
When I’m with you
The problems of life
Seem smaller
Less burdensome
When you hug me
It’s so deep
I feel your care
I feel your support
I miss that now
I miss the person
That stands beside me
That supports me
It’s been hard
I miss you
I miss me
I miss what you give me
© 2012 Sunset Girl
Author's Note
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It's been said that a good relationship is one where you can truly be yourself with the other person and they make you a better person, more true to yourself. When I find that person, it changed me in so many right ways. But that relationship is long-distance which takes on even more.
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. you sing a very soulful heartsong ... the pain of a long-distance relationship and yet the resilience it gives you expresses itself really well in your words ... your poetic voice sounds beautiful and authentic ... i'm glad that love is making you blossom so beautifully ... this is true magic ... i have known it and i know how much you must cherish it ...
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you, your words give me the want to keep sharing my works.
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12 Years Ago
. you're very welcome ... i absolutely love the poetry you write ... and i'm pretty sure i'll love t.. read more. you're very welcome ... i absolutely love the poetry you write ... and i'm pretty sure i'll love the prose you write too ... i'm looking forward to reading your novel :) ...
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12 Years Ago
Thank you, I'm looking forward to having time this fall to work on it :)
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12 Years Ago
. awesome :) ...
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Added on August 25, 2012
Last Updated on August 25, 2012
Author
Sunset GirlMI
About
Writing can help one express what they can't seem to explain verbally.
My poems are mostly about life, love and relationships. I started writing more when I thought people just wouldn't understand me.. more..
Writing
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