heart concert.

love situations.

my heart is in a mosh pit,

it can't get out.

is it happy 'cause of the fun,

or is it a sweet tragedy?

my mind is the loud music,

booming in your little ears,

putting you in a love trance.

As I draw you closer,

there's a chance,

that I'll touch your hand.

Will you take it?

Will you sing with me?

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

I love your soft flowing words and insights, but the last lines really hit the heart... those questions that face us all... Will we be loved and wanted in return.. perhaps the deepest longing of the heart... Beautiful...

[Augustus]

a beautiful poem...
"there's a chance I'll touch your hand
Will you take it?"
Melodious romance and romantic melody.... :)
lovely expressions throughout the poem...
"sweet tragedy", "love trance"... beautiful in a dreamy way..
lovely write...