Broken

A cry for help

terror no one can hear.

No one to fight for her

no one to protect her

fear overwhelming the young girl.

Scared to death,

of whats next to come.

Horror as she realizes

her life is over.

Her spirit forever broken.

Reviews

[Emmie]

Don't get me wrong. Short poems can be great and full of emotion. I feel like yours was too short to gain any true emotion. Try making it longer. Sit down and take time to think about the bigger picture instead of the flat details. Don't take this too personally. Happy writing =)