Hapiness

an attempt to bring the feeling into words

The sun upon a garden shines
Each rose a beautiful thing
Giving love and happiness
Making all who see it sing
This garden bright my sanctum be
All feelings now unleashed
Chances plenty, so more to attempt
My happiness will remain mine

Reviews

[happy girl]

That was beautifully written.....it flowed very well and had beautiful imagery, two very important parts of poetry. Well written, and pretty much no spelling errors.